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inc/background.alley.go

@@ -4,10 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// alley — part of the catalogue's "Noodle háza & a sikátor" row — not in the deck.
-//
-// Not painted yet: the file is missing on purpose, and inkwell draws its
-// placeholder instead — which is exactly the greybox convention.
 func backgroundAlley() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgAlley,

inc/background.bbs_terminal.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// bbsTerminal — deck 11.
 func backgroundBbsTerminal() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgBBSTerminal,

inc/background.bvk_branch.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// bvkBranch — deck 18.
 func backgroundBvkBranch() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgBVKBranch,

inc/background.columbarium.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// columbarium — deck 23.
 func backgroundColumbarium() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgColumbarium,

inc/background.curator_shop.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// curatorShop — deck 19.
 func backgroundCuratorShop() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgCuratorShop,

inc/background.hackerspace.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// hackerspace — deck 06.
 func backgroundHackerspace() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgHackerspace,

inc/background.hospital.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// hospital — deck 13.
 func backgroundHospital() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgHospital,

inc/background.ice_cream_shop.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// iceCreamShop — deck 07.
 func backgroundIceCreamShop() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgIceCreamShop,

inc/background.manager.go

@@ -1,20 +1,9 @@
 package inc
 
-// Backgrounds — one image asset per screen, one file each.
-//
-// A background is the whole of a screen's art: inkwell scales it over the
-// entire window, so every file here points at a 640×380 PNG under assets/bg/,
-// the size the concept-art deck is drawn at. Two of them are not painted yet
-// and fall back to inkwell's placeholder.
-//
-// The order below is the deck's, which is the wiki's location-catalogue order
-// (projects/realworld/entities#helyszinek).
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// registerBackground adds every background to the game.
 func registerBackground(w *World) {
 	for _, a := range []inkwell.Asset{
 		backgroundSelector(),

inc/background.noodle_house.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// noodleHouse — deck 02.
 func backgroundNoodleHouse() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgNoodleHouse,

inc/background.norman_apartment.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// normanApartment — deck 03.
 func backgroundNormanApartment() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgNormanApartment,

inc/background.paul_shop.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// paulShop — deck 01.
 func backgroundPaulShop() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgPaulShop,

inc/background.police_station.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// policeStation — deck 04.
 func backgroundPoliceStation() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgPoliceStation,

inc/background.public_bbs.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// publicBbs — deck 17.
 func backgroundPublicBBS() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgPublicBBS,

inc/background.rooftop_hideout.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// rooftopHideout — deck 16.
 func backgroundRooftopHideout() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgRooftopHideout,

inc/background.samizdat_press.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// samizdatPress — deck 21.
 func backgroundSamizdatPress() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgSamizdatPress,

inc/background.scrap_market.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// scrapMarket — deck 20.
 func backgroundScrapMarket() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgScrapMarket,

inc/background.secret_club.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// secretClub — deck 10.
 func backgroundSecretClub() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgSecretClub,

inc/background.secret_lab.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// secretLab — deck 15.
 func backgroundSecretLab() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgSecretLab,

inc/background.selector.go

@@ -4,10 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// selector — the wiki's Helyszínválasztó — no deck number, and not drawn.
-//
-// Not painted yet: the file is missing on purpose, and inkwell draws its
-// placeholder instead — which is exactly the greybox convention.
 func backgroundSelector() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgSelector,

inc/background.server_farm.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// serverFarm — deck 14.
 func backgroundServerFarm() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgServerFarm,

inc/background.showroom.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// showroom — deck 22.
 func backgroundShowroom() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgShowroom,

inc/background.small_restaurant.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// smallRestaurant — deck 09.
 func backgroundSmallRestaurant() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgSmallRestaurant,

inc/background.street.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// street — deck 12.
 func backgroundStreet() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgStreet,

inc/background.trinket_shop.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// trinketShop — deck 08.
 func backgroundTrinketShop() inkwell.Asset {
 	return inkwell.Asset{
 		Name: BgTrinketShop,

inc/boot.manager.go

@@ -1,26 +1,14 @@
-// Package inc is the whole game, in one flat package.
-//
-// Every file is named [category].[name].go: one category per concern, one
-// entity per file. A category's <category>.manager.go holds what ties that
-// category together — its Register, its shared types — and the files beside it
-// hold one screen, one background, one item each.
-//
-// This file is the boot category: it wires the layers together, and it is the
-// only place where the world, the content, the theme and the HUD meet. main.go
-// knows nothing else.
 package inc
 
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// Opts are the run parameters.
 type Opts struct {
-	Screen string // starting screen; empty means the alley
+	Screen string
-	Finale bool   // start with the finale, to try the Nokia-punk theme switch
+	Finale bool
 }
 
-// New builds a ready-to-run game.
 func New(o Opts) *inkwell.Game {
 	start := o.Screen
 	if start == "" {
@@ -45,9 +33,7 @@ func New(o Opts) *inkwell.Game {
 func bootOpening(w *World, start string, finale bool) []inkwell.Action {
 	acts := []inkwell.Action{
 		EnterScene(w, start),
-		// Beat 2 (the police station) will set the tip flag. Until that beat
+
-		// is written we set it here so the alley slice is playable end to end —
-		// the conditional branch itself is real code, not bypassed.
 		inkwell.SetFlag(FlagPoliceTip),
 		inkwell.Say(Paul, "Back alley. Just like the clerk said."),
 		TapeSay(Dex, "A government office tipped you off to remove something from a scene. That doesn't strike you as odd?"),

inc/boot.manager_test.go

@@ -19,9 +19,6 @@ func newTestGame(t *testing.T) *inkwell.Game {
 	return g
 }
 
-// The engine's Validate only checks scene→asset/character references. A typo in
-// a dialogue, script or item name would surface at runtime as a silent no-op
-// (RunDialogue and RunScript fail quietly), so check them here.
 func TestReferencesResolve(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 
@@ -45,7 +42,7 @@ func TestReferencesResolve(t *testing.T) {
 			t.Errorf("tape character not registered: %q", n)
 		}
 	}
-	// Every loadable tape needs an item, a character and a dialogue.
+
 	for item, char := range TapeItems {
 		if !g.ItemManager.Has(item) {
 			t.Errorf("tape item not registered: %q", item)
@@ -59,9 +56,6 @@ func TestReferencesResolve(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// The two-channel rule: every tape needs its own voice colour, distinct from
-// the world's. Without that, "if something is amber, a tape said it" is not
-// readable.
 func TestTapeVoicesAreDistinct(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 	paul, _ := g.CharacterManager.Get(Paul)
@@ -84,8 +78,6 @@ func TestTapeVoicesAreDistinct(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// HUD geometry: the two channels must not overlap, and both must stay inside
-// the HUD strip.
 func TestHUDGeometry(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 
@@ -112,8 +104,6 @@ func TestHUDGeometry(t *testing.T) {
 		t.Errorf("tape slots cross the divider: %v > %v", ts.Bounds.X+ts.Bounds.W, DividerX)
 	}
 
-	// The dialogue box deliberately covers only the left region, so a tape can
-	// comment alongside the conversation.
 	db, ok := g.UIManager.Get("dialog")
 	if !ok {
 		t.Fatal("no 'dialog' widget")
@@ -124,8 +114,6 @@ func TestHUDGeometry(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// The guard must be registered FIRST so it ticks LAST among the widgets —
-// otherwise it would swallow HUD clicks.
 func TestWidgetOrder(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 	n := g.UIManager.Names()
@@ -137,22 +125,9 @@ func TestWidgetOrder(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// Every screen needs a background, the drawn ones need the file to be where the
-// asset says it is, and the file has to be exactly screen-sized.
-//
-// The path check: a renamed or mistyped path shows up in the running game only
-// as an inkwell placeholder, which is exactly what a still-greyboxed screen
-// looks like — invisible as a bug.
-//
-// The size check: the engine scales a background over the WHOLE screen, so a
-// painting that is not ScreenW×ScreenH is silently squashed to fit. That is why
-// the screen is 640×380 in the first place; this keeps the two in step.
 func TestSceneBackgroundsResolve(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 
-	// Not drawn yet: these render as placeholders on purpose. The alley is
-	// missing from the concept-art deck; the selector is the wiki's menu
-	// screen, which the deck does not cover at all.
 	undrawn := map[string]bool{BgAlley: true, BgSelector: true}
 
 	for _, n := range g.SceneManager.Names() {
@@ -183,9 +158,6 @@ func TestSceneBackgroundsResolve(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// exits reads the connection graph back out of the registered screens. The
-// exit hotspots are named "exit:<target>", which is what keeps the graph
-// machine-readable — see screen.exit.go.
 func exits(g *inkwell.Game, screen string) []string {
 	var out []string
 	for _, h := range g.SceneManager.MustGet(screen).Hotspots {
@@ -196,8 +168,6 @@ func exits(g *inkwell.Game, screen string) []string {
 	return out
 }
 
-// An exit that names a screen nobody registered is a dead end the player walks
-// into: the engine logs "changeScene: unknown" and nothing happens on screen.
 func TestExitsResolve(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 	for _, n := range g.SceneManager.Names() {
@@ -209,12 +179,6 @@ func TestExitsResolve(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// Every screen has to be walkable to from the start of the game, through the
-// exits alone — the arrow keys are a browsing tool, not the map. A screen that
-// only the arrow keys can reach is content no player would ever see.
-//
-// The walk starts at Paul's shop, where the letter arrives, and mostly runs
-// through the selector: that is what the wiki's location graph is centred on.
 func TestEveryScreenIsReachable(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 
@@ -238,8 +202,6 @@ func TestEveryScreenIsReachable(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// A screen with no way out at all is a trap: the player walks in and the only
-// way on is the debug walk.
 func TestEveryScreenHasAWayOut(t *testing.T) {
 	g := newTestGame(t)
 	for _, n := range g.SceneManager.Names() {

inc/character.dex.go

@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// dex is the personality imprint of a dead friend, permanently in slot 1 of
-// Paul's Armilla. Constant commentary, hint system, dialogue partner.
 func characterDex() inkwell.Character {
 	return inkwell.Character{
 		Name:        Dex,

inc/character.manager.go

@@ -1,16 +1,9 @@
 package inc
 
-// Characters — the game's cast, one file each.
-//
-// Tapes are characters too, not props — the wiki is explicit about it. They
-// have no body in the scene, so they carry no W/H and never appear in
-// Scene.Actors; their voice lives in the tape channel (see TapeSay).
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// registerCharacter adds every character to the game.
 func registerCharacter(w *World) {
 	for _, c := range []inkwell.Character{
 		characterPaul(),

inc/character.mystery_tape.go

@@ -4,11 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// mysteryTape is the tape found in the alley — in truth Norman's Personal
-// Tape, but the player only learns that in the finale.
-//
-// Its voice is a colder, greyer amber than Dex's. That pays off in reverse:
-// it never once spoke in the same voice as the friend.
 func characterMysteryTape() inkwell.Character {
 	return inkwell.Character{
 		Name:        TapeMystery,

inc/character.paul.go

@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// paul is the player character: a junk dealer and street survivor, technically
-// competent, living on the edge of the city.
 func characterPaul() inkwell.Character {
 	return inkwell.Character{
 		Name:  Paul,
@@ -13,8 +11,7 @@ func characterPaul() inkwell.Character {
 		W:     28,
 		H:     68,
 		Start: inkwell.Point{X: 120, Y: 232},
-		// Bone white: the world and Paul. If something is amber, a tape said
+
-		// it — see the colour rule in README.
 		SpeechColor: Ink,
 	}
 }

inc/character.support_tape.go

@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// supportTape answers everything with basic information, insufferably. Dex
-// hates it. Acquired in Chinatown (beat 5) — not reachable yet.
 func characterSupportTape() inkwell.Character {
 	return inkwell.Character{
 		Name:        TapeSupport,

inc/content.manager.go

@@ -1,14 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// Content — the composition root for everything the game declares:
-// assets, characters, items, dialogues, scripts and scenes.
-//
-// Each registered entity lives in its own file, named after its category:
-// adding a screen means adding screen.<name>.go and background.<name>.go, plus
-// one line in each category's manager list — nothing else moves.
-
-// registerContent adds every entity to the game. Order matters only in that
-// screens reference backgrounds and characters, which Game.Validate cross-checks.
 func registerContent(w *World) {
 	registerBackground(w)
 	registerCharacter(w)

inc/dialog.dex_talk.go

@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// dexTalk is the standing conversation with Dex. Its branches are gated on
-// story flags, so the same entry point stays useful as the game progresses.
 func dialogDexTalk() inkwell.Dialogue {
 	return inkwell.Dialogue{
 		Name:  DlgDex,

inc/dialog.manager.go

@@ -1,20 +1,9 @@
 package inc
 
-// Dialogues — the game's dialogue trees, one file each.
-//
-// Talking to a tape carries the same weight as talking to a human NPC — the
-// wiki states this explicitly. Tapes are dialogue partners, not menus.
-//
-// A note on DialogueChoice.Once: inkwell HIDES a spent choice. The wireframe
-// deck wanted it struck through but still visible, so the list becomes a
-// memory of what you already tried. That is still open — see README, "Known
-// gaps".
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// registerDialog adds every dialogue to the game.
 func registerDialog(w *World) {
 	for _, d := range []inkwell.Dialogue{
 		dialogDexTalk(),

inc/dialog.mystery_tape_silent.go

@@ -4,9 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// mysteryTapeSilent covers the stretch before the club trigger (beat 6), while
-// the tape is still mute. Talking to it is really Dex talking about it — the
-// tape itself says nothing.
 func dialogMysteryTapeSilent() inkwell.Dialogue {
 	return inkwell.Dialogue{
 		Name:  DlgMysteryTape,

inc/item.black_market_armilla.go

@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// blackMarketArmilla is flavour, not a quest trigger: the gap between
-// legitimised technology and street reality.
 func itemBlackMarketArmilla() inkwell.Item {
 	return inkwell.Item{
 		Name:        ItemBlackArmilla,
@@ -15,8 +13,7 @@ func itemBlackMarketArmilla() inkwell.Item {
 			TapeSay(Dex, "Two slots, and both of them lie about the temperature. Don't trade me in for it."),
 		),
 		OnUseWith: map[string]inkwell.Action{
-			// An AUTHORED failure. Nothing is consumed, the character reacts,
+
-			// the tape remarks. Never a generic error line.
 			ItemNoodleLetter: inkwell.Seq(
 				inkwell.Say(Paul, "A letter and a bracelet. Brilliant."),
 				TapeSay(Dex, "Nothing. Which is what I'd charge for it."),

inc/item.manager.go

@@ -1,15 +1,9 @@
 package inc
 
-// Items — the game's inventory, one file each.
-//
-// Personal Tapes are inventory items and quest triggers at the same time: they
-// go into slot 2 of Paul's Armilla, and loading one activates its effect.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// registerItem adds every item to the game.
 func registerItem(w *World) {
 	for _, i := range []inkwell.Item{
 		itemNoodleLetter(),

inc/item.mystery_tape.go

@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// mysteryTape is the engine of the investigation. Password-locked; it only
-// starts speaking after the club trigger (beat 6).
 func itemMysteryTape() inkwell.Item {
 	return inkwell.Item{
 		Name:        ItemMysteryTape,

inc/item.noodle_letter.go

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// noodleLetter starts the story: it is what brings Paul to the city.
 func itemNoodleLetter() inkwell.Item {
 	return inkwell.Item{
 		Name:        ItemNoodleLetter,

inc/names.manager.go

@@ -1,99 +1,67 @@
 package inc
 
-// Names — the single source of entity names and world-state keys.
-//
-// The names follow the wiki entity catalogue
-// (services/wiki-pages/pages/projects/realworld/entities) so that content and
-// design share one vocabulary. Note that the wiki's world-state table spells
-// its keys in Hungarian (hatosagi_tipp, titokzatos_tape_megvan, romlas_szint,
-// tape_behelyezes, sikator); the constants below are their English
-// equivalents — the mapping is one-to-one, in catalogue order.
-//
-// These constants are the vocabulary every other category speaks in; nothing
-// here depends on anything else in the game.
-
-// Characters.
 const (
 	Paul = "paul"
-	Dex  = "dex" // Personal Tape, permanently in slot 1 of Paul's Armilla
+	Dex  = "dex"
 
-	// Tapes (Personal Tapes) are characters, not props: the wiki is explicit
+	TapeMystery = "tape_mystery"
-	// that they have their own personality, motivation and voice.
+	TapeSupport = "tape_support"
-	TapeMystery = "tape_mystery" // = The AI, but that only surfaces in the finale
-	TapeSupport = "tape_support" // the "Indian tech support" tape
 )
 
-// Inventory items.
 const (
 	ItemNoodleLetter = "noodle_letter"
 	ItemMysteryTape  = "mystery_tape"
 	ItemBlackArmilla = "black_market_armilla"
 )
 
-// Dialogues.
 const (
 	DlgDex         = "dex_talk"
 	DlgMysteryTape = "mystery_tape_silent"
 )
 
-// Scripts.
 const (
 	ScriptTapeInsert = "tape_insert"
 	ScriptFinale     = "awakening_finale"
 )
 
-// World state — flags and variables.
 const (
-	FlagPoliceTip = "police_tip"       // wiki: hatosagi_tipp
+	FlagPoliceTip = "police_tip"
-	FlagHasTape   = "has_mystery_tape" // wiki: titokzatos_tape_megvan
+	FlagHasTape   = "has_mystery_tape"
-	FlagTapeSpoke = "tape_spoke"       // wiki: tape_megszolalt
+	FlagTapeSpoke = "tape_spoke"
-	FlagClubEntry = "club_entry"       // wiki: klub_bejutas — the shopkeeper let Paul through
+	FlagClubEntry = "club_entry"
 
 	VarSlot2        = "armilla.slot2"
 	VarArmillaStrip = "armilla.strip"
-	VarDecay        = "decay_level" // wiki: romlas_szint
+	VarDecay        = "decay_level"
 )
 
-// Screens.
-//
-// One constant per screen in the wiki's location catalogue
-// (entities#helyszinek), whose order the concept-art deck follows number for
-// number (games/realworld_screen_assets); the trailing comment is the wiki's
-// Hungarian name. The last seven are the catalogue's "javaslat" locations —
-// drawn, so they are wired up, but no beat lands on them yet.
-//
-// Two screens have no deck number. The alley shares the catalogue's "Noodle
-// háza & a sikátor" row with the house; the selector is the wiki's
-// Helyszínválasztó (story#helyszínválasztó), the menu screen the location
-// graph is centred on.
 const (
-	ScreenSelector        = "selector"         // wiki: Helyszínválasztó
+	ScreenSelector        = "selector"
-	ScreenPaulShop        = "paul_shop"        // wiki: Paul boltja / garázsa
+	ScreenPaulShop        = "paul_shop"
-	ScreenNoodleHouse     = "noodle_house"     // wiki: Noodle háza
+	ScreenNoodleHouse     = "noodle_house"
-	ScreenNormanApartment = "norman_apartment" // wiki: Norman lakása / műhelye
+	ScreenNormanApartment = "norman_apartment"
-	ScreenPoliceStation   = "police_station"   // wiki: rendőrség / fogda
+	ScreenPoliceStation   = "police_station"
-	ScreenAlley           = "alley"            // wiki: sikátor (Noodle háza mögött)
+	ScreenAlley           = "alley"
-	ScreenHackerspace     = "hackerspace"      // wiki: hackerspace
+	ScreenHackerspace     = "hackerspace"
-	ScreenIceCreamShop    = "ice_cream_shop"   // wiki: fagyizó
+	ScreenIceCreamShop    = "ice_cream_shop"
-	ScreenTrinketShop     = "trinket_shop"     // wiki: chinatowni csecsebecse-bolt
+	ScreenTrinketShop     = "trinket_shop"
-	ScreenSmallRestaurant = "small_restaurant" // wiki: kajálda
+	ScreenSmallRestaurant = "small_restaurant"
-	ScreenSecretClub      = "secret_club"      // wiki: titkos klub („vízalatti nap")
+	ScreenSecretClub      = "secret_club"
-	ScreenBBSTerminal     = "bbs_terminal"     // wiki: a terminál / BBS-hozzáférési pont
+	ScreenBBSTerminal     = "bbs_terminal"
-	ScreenStreet          = "street"           // wiki: köztér / utca
+	ScreenStreet          = "street"
-	ScreenHospital        = "hospital"         // wiki: kórház / pszichiátria
+	ScreenHospital        = "hospital"
-	ScreenServerFarm      = "server_farm"      // wiki: szerverfarm / adatközpont
+	ScreenServerFarm      = "server_farm"
-	ScreenSecretLab       = "secret_lab"       // wiki: titkos kutatólabor
+	ScreenSecretLab       = "secret_lab"
-	ScreenRooftopHideout  = "rooftop_hideout"  // wiki: Norman tetőterasz-rejteke
+	ScreenRooftopHideout  = "rooftop_hideout"
-	ScreenPublicBBS       = "public_bbs"       // wiki 💡: nyilvános BBS-terminál
+	ScreenPublicBBS       = "public_bbs"
-	ScreenBVKBranch       = "bvk_branch"       // wiki 💡: BVK-kirendeltség (San Francisco)
+	ScreenBVKBranch       = "bvk_branch"
-	ScreenCuratorShop     = "curator_shop"     // wiki 💡: kurátor-szerviz („a Mester")
+	ScreenCuratorShop     = "curator_shop"
-	ScreenScrapMarket     = "scrap_market"     // wiki 💡: selejt-piac
+	ScreenScrapMarket     = "scrap_market"
-	ScreenSamizdatPress   = "samizdat_press"   // wiki 💡: samizdat-nyomda / P2P-csomópont
+	ScreenSamizdatPress   = "samizdat_press"
-	ScreenShowroom        = "showroom"         // wiki 💡: Neumatronic márkakereskedés
+	ScreenShowroom        = "showroom"
-	ScreenColumbarium     = "columbarium"      // wiki 💡: kolumbárium / Dex emlékhelye
+	ScreenColumbarium     = "columbarium"
 )
 
-// Backgrounds — one per screen, same order.
 const (
 	BgSelector        = "bg_selector"
 	BgPaulShop        = "bg_paul_shop"
@@ -121,19 +89,14 @@ const (
 	BgColumbarium     = "bg_columbarium"
 )
 
-// Tapes maps a character name to the label shown in the tape channel header.
-// TapeChannel uses this to decide whether a line belongs in the tape channel
-// or stays in the scene.
 var Tapes = map[string]string{
 	Dex:         "DEX",
 	TapeMystery: "UNKNOWN TAPE",
 	TapeSupport: "TECH SUPPORT",
 }
 
-// IsTape reports whether a character is a tape.
 func IsTape(name string) bool { _, ok := Tapes[name]; return ok }
 
-// TapeDisplayName is the label shown in the tape channel header.
 func TapeDisplayName(name string) string {
 	if d, ok := Tapes[name]; ok {
 		return d
@@ -141,16 +104,12 @@ func TapeDisplayName(name string) string {
 	return name
 }
 
-// TapeItems maps an inventory item that can go into slot 2 to the character
-// living on it.
 var TapeItems = map[string]string{
 	ItemMysteryTape: TapeMystery,
 }
 
-// IsTapeItem reports whether an item can be loaded into slot 2.
 func IsTapeItem(item string) bool { _, ok := TapeItems[item]; return ok }
 
-// TapeDialogue is the dialogue belonging to a tape in slot 2.
 func TapeDialogue(item string) string {
 	switch item {
 	case ItemMysteryTape:

inc/screen.alley.go

@@ -4,21 +4,13 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// alley is the alley behind Noodle's house — beat 3, and the vertical slice the
-// whole HUD is measured against: hotspots, a gated pickup, the two-slot
-// Armilla, tape dialogue and an authored failure.
-//
-// The wiki keeps it in the same catalogue row as the house ("Noodle háza & a
-// sikátor") and its graph has one arrow in, NoodleUtcafront → Sikátor, so the
-// only way out is back to the street. The alley's own locked back door is the
-// New Game+ hook and leads to a room the deck has not painted.
 func screenAlley() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenAlley,
 		title:      "ALLEY — BEHIND NOODLE'S HOUSE",
 		background: BgAlley,
 		exits: []exit{
-			// On the left: the back door hotspot below owns the other end.
+
 			{to: ScreenNoodleHouse, label: "back out to the street", side: sideLeft},
 		},
 		actors: []inkwell.SceneActor{
@@ -29,8 +21,6 @@ func screenAlley() screen {
 	}
 }
 
-// hidingPlace holds the mystery tape. It only opens once Paul has the tip from
-// the police station (beat 2) — without it he does not know what to look for.
 func hidingPlace() inkwell.Hotspot {
 	return inkwell.Hotspot{
 		Name:  "hiding_place",
@@ -57,8 +47,6 @@ func hidingPlace() inkwell.Hotspot {
 	}
 }
 
-// backDoor is the New Game+ hook: the code can be entered on the first visit
-// too, if the player already knows it.
 func backDoor() inkwell.Hotspot {
 	return inkwell.Hotspot{
 		Name:   "back_door",
@@ -71,7 +59,7 @@ func backDoor() inkwell.Hotspot {
 		),
 		OnTalk: inkwell.Say(Paul, "To the door? I'm not there yet."),
 		OnUseWith: map[string]inkwell.Action{
-			// An AUTHORED failure — not the engine's hardcoded flash.
+
 			ItemBlackArmilla: inkwell.Seq(
 				inkwell.Say(Paul, "A black-market bracelet doesn't open a keypad."),
 				TapeSay(Dex, "But you do get an advert out of it."),

inc/screen.bbs_terminal.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// bbsTerminal is the screen you get when Paul sits down at a terminal: the
-// catalogue calls it a "Tárgy/portál", a physical object in the world that
-// opens the SPOKE — BBS surface (wiki: entities#helyszinek).
-//
-// It is the same screen wherever the terminal stands — the club's ECHO box,
-// Norman's machine at the flat, the old one on the roof — which is why its way
-// out is "back", and not a place.
 func screenBbsTerminal() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenBBSTerminal,

inc/screen.bvk_branch.go

@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// bvkBranch is a 💡 suggestion: the local certification office, imprimatur
-// stamps and licence checks and numbered waiting rooms — everything a man with
-// a jailbroken two-slot Armilla should stay away from
-// (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenBvkBranch() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenBVKBranch,

inc/screen.columbarium.go

@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// columbarium is a 💡 suggestion: where Dex is buried. A quiet place, away
-// from the noise of the terminals — the loss-and-letting-go thread, which is
-// the same thread as Norman and The AI
-// (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenColumbarium() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenColumbarium,

inc/screen.curator_shop.go

@@ -1,8 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// curatorShop is a 💡 suggestion: the last workshop of the declining curators'
-// guild — quartz tuning, tape repair, craft handed down for generations. The
-// man who built Paul's second slot (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenCuratorShop() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenCuratorShop,

inc/screen.exit.go

@@ -1,28 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// Exits — the connections between screens.
-//
-// Where a screen leads is recorded in that screen's own file, and it comes from
-// the wiki's location graph (projects/realworld/story#helyszín-gráf-vázlat).
-// That graph has two kinds of edge, and so does this file:
-//
-//   - Physical adjacency. The alley is behind Noodle's house; the club is
-//     through the back of the trinket shop; the noodle place is next door to
-//     it. These are the arrows the wiki draws between locations, and they are
-//     declared with `to`.
-//   - The selector. The wiki centres its map on a "Helyszínválasztó" — not a
-//     real location but the menu screen every main location connects to both
-//     ways. A screen marks itself with onSelector; selector.go builds the other
-//     half of each of those edges.
-//
-// Some of the wiki's arrows are one-way with a condition on them ("beengedés",
-// "NG+ kód", "Sumphor liftkódja"). `needs` carries that: the exit is there, and
-// says so, but will not open until the flag is set.
-//
-// Until the doors are measured on the paintings, an exit is a strip along one
-// edge of the picture — the convention every 1990s point & click used, and a
-// one-field change to re-aim at a real door later.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
@@ -30,14 +7,12 @@ import (
 type side int
 
 const (
-	sideLeft  side = iota // off the left edge
+	sideLeft side = iota
-	sideRight             // off the right edge
+	sideRight
-	sideBack              // into the depth of the picture
+	sideBack
-	sideNear              // out towards the camera
+	sideNear
 )
 
-// area is the strip of picture the exit occupies, inside the scene region
-// (below the top bar at y=20, above the HUD divider at y=262).
 func (s side) area() inkwell.Shape {
 	switch s {
 	case sideLeft:
@@ -46,35 +21,26 @@ func (s side) area() inkwell.Shape {
 		return inkwell.Rect(584, 40, 56, 212)
 	case sideBack:
 		return inkwell.Rect(232, 28, 176, 84)
-	default: // sideNear
+	default:
 		return inkwell.Rect(232, 214, 176, 48)
 	}
 }
 
-// exit is one way out of a screen.
 type exit struct {
-	to    string // the screen it leads to; empty means "back the way you came"
+	to    string
-	label string // what the status line calls it
+	label string
 	side  side
 
-	// area overrides the edge strip. The selector's map pins use it; nothing
-	// else should need to until the art arrives.
 	area inkwell.Shape
 
-	// needs is a flag that has to be set before the exit opens, and blocked is
-	// what Paul says while it is not.
 	needs   string
 	blocked string
 }
 
-// toSelector is the way back out to the rest of the city, on every screen the
-// wiki's Helyszínválasztó lists.
 func toSelector() exit {
 	return exit{to: ScreenSelector, label: "the rest of the city", side: sideNear}
 }
 
-// exitName is how a connection stays machine-readable: the graph can be read
-// straight back out of the registered scenes, so a test can walk it.
 func exitName(to string) string {
 	if to == "" {
 		return "exit:back"

inc/screen.hackerspace.go

@@ -1,11 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// hackerspace: the community workshop at the edge of the Mission, printers and
-// stripped servers and paranoid amateur cryptographers. Where the server-farm
-// access tape can be had (wiki: entities#helyszinek, timeline 24).
-//
-// The wiki's graph gives it no physical neighbour, so it hangs off the
-// selector like every other main location.
 func screenHackerspace() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenHackerspace,

inc/screen.hospital.go

@@ -1,7 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// hospital is the clinical dead end: Dr. Maren looked for a medical reason for
-// Norman's state and did not find one (wiki: entities, timeline 21).
 func screenHospital() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenHospital,

inc/screen.ice_cream_shop.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// iceCreamShop stands where Paul's old bar used to be, and they insist there
-// never was a bar. The BVK-registered terminal in the corner is the one the
-// candy-crush guy will not give up (wiki: story, the Fagyizó beat).
-//
-// The search he eventually allows is what names the club — a lead, not a door:
-// the way there is the trinket shop's address, so this screen has no exit of
-// its own.
 func screenIceCreamShop() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenIceCreamShop,

inc/screen.manager.go

@@ -1,80 +1,50 @@
 package inc
 
-// Screens — one file per screen.
-//
-// "Screen" is this project's word: the wiki's catalogue, the concept-art deck
-// and the beat tables all count screens. inkwell's word for the same thing is
-// Scene, which is the type every file here returns — a screen IS the engine's
-// scene, and the rest of the code says "scene" only where it is talking to the
-// engine.
-//
-// A file here holds everything that is true of one screen: its picture, the
-// name on the top bar, where you can get to from it (screen.exit.go), and — once its
-// beat is written — its hotspots, NPCs and dialogue. Only the alley has that
-// last part so far; the rest are greybox.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// screen is what each file in this package fills in.
 type screen struct {
 	name       string
 	title      string
 	background string
 
-	// exits: where you can get to from here. See screen.exit.go.
 	exits []exit
-	// onSelector marks a main location — one of those the wiki's
+
-	// Helyszínválasztó lists (story#helyszín-gráf-vázlat). It gets a way back
-	// to the selector for free, and the selector gets a way here.
 	onSelector bool
 
-	// What an authored beat adds on top. Zero values are fine: Paul lands in
-	// the middle of the default floor strip and nothing else happens.
 	hotspots  []inkwell.Hotspot
 	actors    []inkwell.SceneActor
 	walkboxes []inkwell.Polygon
 	onEnter   inkwell.Action
 }
 
-// screenDeck is every screen in the game, in the order of the wiki's location
-// catalogue (entities#helyszinek) — which the concept-art deck follows number
-// for number. Registration order is this order, and it is also the order the
-// arrow keys walk (ui.screen_nav.go).
-//
-// Deck 05, Norman's workplace, is in the catalogue but has not been drawn, so
-// it has no file yet. The alley has no deck number: the catalogue keeps it in
-// the same row as Noodle's house, and that is where it sits here too.
 var screenDeck = []func() screen{
-	screenPaulShop,        // 01
+	screenPaulShop,
-	screenNoodleHouse,     // 02
+	screenNoodleHouse,
-	screenAlley,           // 02, same catalogue row
+	screenAlley,
-	screenNormanApartment, // 03
+	screenNormanApartment,
-	screenPoliceStation,   // 04
+	screenPoliceStation,
-	screenHackerspace,     // 06
+	screenHackerspace,
-	screenIceCreamShop,    // 07
+	screenIceCreamShop,
-	screenTrinketShop,     // 08
+	screenTrinketShop,
-	screenSmallRestaurant, // 09
+	screenSmallRestaurant,
-	screenSecretClub,      // 10
+	screenSecretClub,
-	screenBbsTerminal,     // 11
+	screenBbsTerminal,
-	screenStreet,          // 12
+	screenStreet,
-	screenHospital,        // 13
+	screenHospital,
-	screenServerFarm,      // 14
+	screenServerFarm,
-	screenSecretLab,       // 15
+	screenSecretLab,
-	screenRooftopHideout,  // 16
+	screenRooftopHideout,
-	screenPublicBBS,       // 17
+	screenPublicBBS,
-	screenBvkBranch,       // 18
+	screenBvkBranch,
-	screenCuratorShop,     // 19
+	screenCuratorShop,
-	screenScrapMarket,     // 20
+	screenScrapMarket,
-	screenSamizdatPress,   // 21
+	screenSamizdatPress,
-	screenShowroom,        // 22
+	screenShowroom,
-	screenColumbarium,     // 23
+	screenColumbarium,
 }
 
-// registerScreen adds every screen to the game, the selector first: it is the centre
-// of the wiki's location graph, and it is built from the screenDeck rather than
-// listed in it.
 func registerScreen(w *World) {
 	screens := make([]screen, 0, len(screenDeck)+1)
 	for _, f := range screenDeck {
@@ -85,8 +55,6 @@ func registerScreen(w *World) {
 	}
 }
 
-// The default floor: the bottom of the scene region, above the HUD divider.
-// A screen with a painted floor of its own overrides it.
 var screenFloor = []inkwell.Polygon{
 	inkwell.Poly(
 		inkwell.Point{X: 16, Y: 196}, inkwell.Point{X: 624, Y: 196},
@@ -94,11 +62,6 @@ var screenFloor = []inkwell.Polygon{
 	),
 }
 
-// screenBuild turns a screen into the engine's scene.
-//
-// The authored hotspots go in front of the exits, because the engine takes the
-// first one whose area contains the click (HotspotAt): a painted thing beats
-// the edge strip an exit sits on, wherever the two overlap.
 func screenBuild(w *World, s screen) inkwell.Scene {
 	exits := s.exits
 	if s.onSelector {
@@ -136,8 +99,6 @@ func screenBuild(w *World, s screen) inkwell.Scene {
 	}
 }
 
-// setVarIfEmpty only writes when the variable is still unset, so re-entering a
-// screen does not clobber what the game has set in the meantime.
 func setVarIfEmpty(name string, v any) inkwell.Action {
 	return Fn(func(ctx *inkwell.Ctx) {
 		if ctx.Game.State.Var(name) == nil {

inc/screen.noodle_house.go

@@ -1,11 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// noodleHouse is the street front outside Noodle's place. By the time Paul
-// gets there the police have sealed the house and taken Noodle in, and a
-// uniform stands in front of the tape (wiki: story#noodle-szál).
-//
-// The wiki's graph runs NoodleUtcafront → Sikátor: the alley behind the house
-// is reached from here, and from nowhere else.
 func screenNoodleHouse() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenNoodleHouse,

inc/screen.norman_apartment.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// normanApartment is the flat Norman was taken from: his Armilla left behind
-// on the side, his Personal Tape missing from it, his terminal full of the
-// correspondence and the diary (wiki: story#norman-lakása).
-//
-// Two ways on from here. His terminal is one of the BBS access points the
-// catalogue lists ("a titkos klub ECHO-terminálja; később Norman lakása /
-// tetőterasz"), and the roof hideout is up his own stairs.
 func screenNormanApartment() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenNormanApartment,

inc/screen.paul_shop.go

@@ -1,13 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// paulShop is where the game starts: the junk shop and garage Paul lives
-// behind (wiki: entities#helyszinek). It is the only screen outside San
-// Francisco — Noodle's letter arrives here and puts him on a bus
-// (wiki: entities, Paul's timeline 1–2).
-//
-// The bus is a screen the deck does not have, so the exit is the journey
-// itself: one way, with no coming back to the shop mid-story. That is also why
-// the shop is not on the selector — it is not one of the city's locations.
 func screenPaulShop() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenPaulShop,

inc/screen.police_station.go

@@ -1,13 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// policeStation is where Noodle is held for dealing in cracked Armillas, and
-// where a clerk quietly tips Paul off about the hiding place
-// (wiki: entities, Paul's timeline 4 and 15).
-//
-// The wiki's graph splits it three ways — utcafront → recepció → kihallgató —
-// but the deck paints it as one screen, so the reception desk, the waiting
-// room and the interview window are hotspots inside this one, not screens of
-// their own.
 func screenPoliceStation() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenPoliceStation,

inc/screen.public_bbs.go

@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// publicBBS is one of the wiki's 💡 suggestions: the canon has BBS terminals
-// standing in cafés, post offices and bus stops — live infrastructure, not
-// relics. An alternative way to read the boards, in a place where somebody can
-// read over your shoulder (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenPublicBBS() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenPublicBBS,

inc/screen.rooftop_hideout.go

@@ -1,11 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// rooftopHideout is Norman's hiding place: an abandoned roof terrace with his
-// personal things, his notes and an old BBS terminal — the emotional high point
-// of the investigation (wiki: entities#helyszinek, timeline 23).
-//
-// It is up the stairs from his flat, and it is one of the places the catalogue
-// puts a terminal.
 func screenRooftopHideout() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenRooftopHideout,

inc/screen.samizdat_press.go

@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// samizdatPress is a 💡 suggestion: the Resistance's physical node — parody
-// BVK databases, underground publications, a P2P node humming in the cellar.
-// The samizdat intellectuals are the first to write down that the world is
-// slipping (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenSamizdatPress() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenSamizdatPress,

inc/screen.scrap_market.go

@@ -1,8 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// scrapMarket is a 💡 suggestion: the black market in condemned ACPs and bare,
-// unstamped tape. Canon says the leak of scrap is not an accident — "something
-// wants to live on" (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenScrapMarket() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenScrapMarket,

inc/screen.secret_club.go

@@ -1,13 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// secretClub is the empty room behind the shop where the "underwater sun"
-// company gave their talk, with a secretary who knows about the BVK's plans for
-// people's minds and nothing about the key or the tape
-// (wiki: story, the club beat).
-//
-// The terminal in here is the one that matters: not under BVK control, ECHO
-// running under the standard LECTOR surface. Reading it is where the mystery
-// tape finally speaks.
 func screenSecretClub() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenSecretClub,

inc/screen.secret_lab.go

@@ -1,13 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// secretLab is the lab the BVK's secret section runs, where Norman lies wired
-// into the simulator: the two-thirds point where Paul finds him, and the
-// screen the finale plays on (wiki: entities#helyszinek, timeline 22 and 25).
-//
-// The wiki's graph runs Híd → security szoba → Norman szimulációs szobája, and
-// the story puts the whole thing inside the Golden Gate Bridge. The deck paints
-// it as one screen, so the door at the foot of the bridge, the observation room
-// and the glass wall are hotspots in here.
 func screenSecretLab() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenSecretLab,

inc/screen.selector.go

@@ -6,17 +6,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// selector is the wiki's Helyszínválasztó: "nem valódi helyszín, hanem a
-// menü-képernyő, ahonnan az összes fő helyszín elérhető"
-// (story#helyszínválasztó). The location graph is centred on it — every main
-// location connects to it both ways, and physical adjacency takes over from
-// there inwards — so without it the city is a handful of disconnected rooms.
-//
-// It is not in the concept-art deck and has no painting, so it renders as an
-// inkwell placeholder with one labelled pin per destination, laid out on a
-// grid. Whatever the map ends up looking like, the connections it carries are
-// the ones the screens declare, not a list kept here: screenSelector() is built from
-// whichever screens marked themselves onSelector.
 func screenSelector(rest []screen) screen {
 	var exits []exit
 	for _, s := range rest {
@@ -34,13 +23,12 @@ func screenSelector(rest []screen) screen {
 		title:      "SAN FRANCISCO",
 		background: BgSelector,
 		exits:      exits,
-		// Nobody stands on a map.
+
 		actors:    []inkwell.SceneActor{},
 		walkboxes: []inkwell.Polygon{},
 	}
 }
 
-// The pin grid: three columns down the scene region, filled top to bottom.
 const (
 	pinCols = 3
 	pinW    = 192.0
@@ -56,8 +44,6 @@ func pin(i int) inkwell.Shape {
 	return inkwell.Rect(pinX+float64(col)*pinGapX, pinY+float64(row)*pinGapY, pinW, pinH)
 }
 
-// pinLabel is the screen's title without the em-dash subtitle: on a map a
-// location wants its name, not its description.
 func pinLabel(title string) string {
 	name, _, _ := strings.Cut(title, " — ")
 	return name

inc/screen.server_farm.go

@@ -1,8 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// serverFarm is the cooled, humming corridors where The AI's physical
-// infrastructure can be seen for what it is. Getting in needs the access tape
-// from the hackerspace or from Noodle (wiki: entities, timeline 24).
 func screenServerFarm() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenServerFarm,

inc/screen.showroom.go

@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// showroom is a 💡 suggestion: the legitimate, glittering side — Armilla
-// cabinets, licensed operators, matte-black Nokia-punk under showroom lights.
-// The contrast with Paul's edge of the world
-// (wiki: entities#potenciális-további-helyszínek).
 func screenShowroom() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenShowroom,

inc/screen.small_restaurant.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// smallRestaurant is the little Chinese place beside the trinket shop, and the
-// lit mirror in its toilet is the puzzle: it flickers, and something shows
-// behind it (wiki: story, the Kajálda beat).
-//
-// The wiki's graph runs Kajálda → étterem rész → WC; the deck paints all three
-// as one screen, so the mirror is a hotspot here. The only way out is back to
-// the shop — this is an inner room, not a location on the selector.
 func screenSmallRestaurant() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenSmallRestaurant,

inc/screen.street.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// street is the city itself: pavements, a square, a metro entrance, and the
-// environmental decay that tracks The AI's spread — glitching systems, odd
-// news, infrastructure that slips (wiki: entities#helyszinek).
-//
-// The wiki's own street front is the one with the hotdog stand and Sumphor on
-// it (story#norman-lakása); that is a beat for this screen, not a screen of its
-// own.
 func screenStreet() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenStreet,

inc/screen.trinket_shop.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// trinketShop is the Chinatown shop at the club's address, whose owner sells
-// Paul junk he does not need and is, in fact, the club's doorman
-// (wiki: story#csecsebecse-bolt--kajálda-szál).
-//
-// Both of the wiki's arrows out of it are here: Bolt → Kajálda, the eating
-// place next door, and Bolt →|beengedés| Klub, which stays shut until the
-// shopkeeper has been shown the underwater sun.
 func screenTrinketShop() screen {
 	return screen{
 		name:       ScreenTrinketShop,

inc/script.awakening_finale.go

@@ -4,12 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// awakeningFinale is the end of game two. The point of it, mechanically, is
-// the theme switch: this is where the Nokia-punk texture breaks in.
-//
-// Run it early and often during development (`go run . -finale`) — it is the
-// single most important visual beat in the game, so you want to be looking at
-// it long before the surrounding scene exists.
 func scriptAwakeningFinale(w *World) inkwell.Script {
 	return inkwell.Script{
 		Name: ScriptFinale,

inc/script.manager.go

@@ -1,13 +1,9 @@
 package inc
 
-// Scripts — the game's named, reusable action sequences:
-// cutscenes and recurring logic, built from the inkwell action set.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// registerScript adds every script to the game.
 func registerScript(w *World) {
 	for _, s := range []inkwell.Script{
 		scriptTapeInsert(w),

inc/script.tape_insert.go

@@ -4,9 +4,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// tapeInsert runs whenever a tape goes into slot 2: it activates the tape and
-// makes Dex comment. The wiki calls the comment mandatory — Dex remarks on
-// every newly loaded tape, without exception.
 func scriptTapeInsert(w *World) inkwell.Script {
 	return inkwell.Script{
 		Name: ScriptTapeInsert,

inc/theme.manager.go

@@ -1,45 +1,28 @@
 package inc
 
-// Themes — the game's two colour themes and its colour tokens.
-//
-// In canon the machines of this world are matte black with a green or amber
-// character display, and in the Real World finale "the Nokia-punk texture
-// breaks in" — with inkwell's runtime theme switching that beat is a single
-// line (see UseTheme and scriptAwakeningFinale).
-//
-// The colour rule: tapes speak in amber (green in Nokia-punk), the world and
-// Paul speak in bone white. If something is amber, a tape said it.
-
 import (
 	"image/color"
 
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// The two theme names. Runtime switching (inkwell UseTheme) refers to these.
 const (
 	RealWorld = "realworld-93"
 	NokiaPunk = "nokia-punk"
 )
 
-// RGB builds an opaque colour from a hex literal.
 func RGB(hex uint32) color.Color {
 	return color.RGBA{R: uint8(hex >> 16), G: uint8(hex >> 8), B: uint8(hex), A: 0xff}
 }
 
-// RGBA builds a colour with the given alpha from a hex literal.
 func RGBA(hex uint32, a uint8) color.Color {
 	return color.RGBA{R: uint8(hex >> 16), G: uint8(hex >> 8), B: uint8(hex), A: a}
 }
 
-// realworld-93 — 95% of the game. Muted earth tones, black HUD, amber tape
-// channel. The Neumatronic layer is not visible yet.
-// The realworld-93 palette. Ink and Amber are the two sides of the two-channel
-// colour rule: the world speaks in bone white, tapes speak in amber.
 var (
-	Ink     = RGB(0xDCD5C4) // bone white — the voice of the world and of Paul
+	Ink     = RGB(0xDCD5C4)
 	InkDim  = RGB(0x8A806B)
-	Amber   = RGB(0xE0A33E) // tape voice
+	Amber   = RGB(0xE0A33E)
 	AmberLo = RGB(0xA8701A)
 	black   = RGB(0x14120E)
 	panel   = RGB(0x0D0B08)
@@ -82,8 +65,8 @@ func realWorldTheme() inkwell.Theme {
 		TopBarAccent: Amber,
 
 		ChatLogBG:       panel,
-		ChatLogPrompt:   InkDim, // your own actions — quiet
+		ChatLogPrompt:   InkDim,
-		ChatLogResponse: Amber,  // tape voice
+		ChatLogResponse: Amber,
 		ChatLogSystem:   RGB(0x6B6353),
 
 		CharacterPanelBG:     panel,
@@ -92,10 +75,6 @@ func realWorldTheme() inkwell.Theme {
 	}
 }
 
-// nokia-punk — at peak decay, on BBS/ECHO terminals, and in the finale.
-// Matte black and phosphor green: a tuned variant of the engine's
-// terminal-green preset.
-// The nokia-punk palette — phosphor green on black glass.
 var (
 	Green   = RGB(0x3BE86B)
 	GreenLo = RGB(0x1F7A39)
@@ -148,7 +127,6 @@ func nokiaPunkTheme() inkwell.Theme {
 	}
 }
 
-// registerTheme adds both themes to the game.
 func registerTheme(g *inkwell.Game) {
 	g.ThemeManager.Register(realWorldTheme())
 	g.ThemeManager.Register(nokiaPunkTheme())

inc/ui.letterbox.go

@@ -1,12 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// Letterbox — the cutscene frame.
-//
-// The one exception to the fixed layout. In cutscene mode the HUD strip and
-// the TopBar are hidden, the scene gets a black bar top and bottom, and a line
-// at the foot of the screen says a tape would like to speak — but it does not
-// speak on its own. The floor is the player's: a tape signals, never interrupts.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2"
@@ -17,7 +10,7 @@ import (
 type Letterbox struct {
 	Name string
 	W    *World
-	Bar  float64 // height of the black bar, top and bottom
+	Bar  float64
 }
 
 func (l *Letterbox) GetName() string { return l.Name }
@@ -26,7 +19,7 @@ func (l *Letterbox) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	if l.W.Mode() != ModeCutscene || !l.W.TapeWaiting() {
 		return
 	}
-	// inkwell's Input only covers the mouse; read the key directly.
+
 	if inpututil.IsKeyJustPressed(ebiten.KeySpace) {
 		l.W.TakeTapeOffer()
 	}

inc/ui.manager.go

@@ -1,85 +1,35 @@
 package inc
 
-// HUD layout.
-//
-//	     0                                     394│396                    639
-//	   ┌────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┐
-//	 0 │ ALLEY — paused                              SRP: 1 tape            │ TopBar (20)
-//	20 ├────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┤
-//	   │                                                                    │
-//	   │            scene — hotspots, characters, SpeechBubble              │ Scene (242)
-//	   │                                                                    │
-//	262├─────────────────────────────────────────┬──────────────────────────┤
-//	   │ Use hook on: floor grate                │ DEX                      │
-//	   │ ┌───┬───┬───┬───┐   ┌───────┐┌────────┐ │ "The hook is a hand      │ HUD (118)
-//	   │ ├───┼───┼───┼───┤   │ 1 DEX ││ 2  —   │ │  shorter than the gap."  │
-//	379└─────────────────────────────────────────┴──────────────────────────┘
-//	     InventoryBar          TapeSlots           TapeChannel
-//
-// On the resolution: the screen is exactly one painted background. inkwell
-// stretches a scene background over the WHOLE screen (core.engine.go), not over
-// the region left free by the HUD, so any screen size other than the art's own
-// squashes every painting — and the deck is drawn at 640×380
-// (games/realworld_screen_assets). Hence 640×380: the art lands pixel for
-// pixel, and the HUD is an opaque strip laid over its foot.
-//
-// That still satisfies what the wiki's "320×200 VGA look" brief was after — a
-// low, wide VGA frame at an exact 2× of a 320-wide canvas — and it still keeps
-// the engine's fixed 6×16 debug font readable: a 16px glyph is 4% of 380, the
-// proportion the design was drawn for. (At 320×190 it would be 8%, rows would
-// overlap and the top bar could not hold a line.)
-//
-// Everything vertical is derived from LineH and from ScreenH below, never from
-// the wireframe deck's ratios, so the layout cannot drift out of step with the
-// font — or with the art — again.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2"
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2/vector"
 )
 
-// Screen and layout, in internal (unscaled) pixels.
 const (
-	// The screen is the size of one painted background, because the engine
-	// scales a background to the full screen: at any other size the art is
-	// squashed. See the note above.
 	ScreenW = 640
 	ScreenH = 380
 
-	// LineH is one text row: the glyph cell plus leading. Every text-bearing
+	LineH = glyphH + 2
-	// box is sized as a multiple of this, so rows can never overlap.
+	Pad   = 6
-	LineH = glyphH + 2 // 18
-	Pad   = 6          // inner padding for every panel
 
-	TopBarH  = LineH + 2 // 20 — one row plus a hairline of breathing room
+	TopBarH  = LineH + 2
-	DividerX = 394       // world | tape channel (61.6% of the width)
+	DividerX = 394
 
-	// The HUD strip is as short as its own contents allow, and is measured
+	HUDH   = Pad + LineH + 4 + invSlot*2 + invGap + Pad
-	// from the bottom of the screen — every pixel it takes is a pixel of the
+	HUDTop = ScreenH - HUDH
-	// painting it covers. It has to hold the status row and, under it, the two
-	// rows of inventory slots (the tallest thing in the strip), padded above
-	// and below.
-	HUDH   = Pad + LineH + 4 + invSlot*2 + invGap + Pad // 118
-	HUDTop = ScreenH - HUDH                             // 262 — the scene | HUD divider
 
-	// Derived HUD rows.
+	statusY = HUDTop + Pad
-	statusY = HUDTop + Pad         // 268
+	slotsY  = HUDTop + Pad + LineH
-	slotsY  = HUDTop + Pad + LineH // 286
+	slotsH  = LineH*2 + Pad*2
-	slotsH  = LineH*2 + Pad*2      // 48 — two rows plus padding
+	invY    = slotsY + 4
-	invY    = slotsY + 4           // 290
 	invSlot = 40
 	invGap  = 4
 )
 
-// registerUI assembles the whole HUD in the conventional Z-order: the debug
-// overlay at the back, the cursor in front.
 func registerUI(w *World) {
 	g := w.G
 
-	// The guard goes FIRST so it ticks LAST among the widgets — widgets tick
-	// in reverse registration order, so every HUD widget gets the click before
-	// it does, and it only ever catches clicks that land on the scene.
 	g.UIManager.Register(&UseWithGuard{Name: "usewith_guard", W: w})
 	g.UIManager.Register(&ActionPump{Name: "pump", W: w})
 	g.UIManager.Register(&screenNav{Name: "screen_nav", W: w})
@@ -89,9 +39,7 @@ func registerUI(w *World) {
 	top := &inkwell.TopBar{
 		Name:   "topbar",
 		Height: TopBarH,
-		// The right section prints State.Var(TimeVar). We deliberately reuse
+
-		// it for the Armilla's single-line phosphor strip: in canon the device
-		// display is one line of text, not a phone screen.
 		TimeVar: VarArmillaStrip,
 	}
 	w.SetTopBar(top)
@@ -119,15 +67,12 @@ func registerUI(w *World) {
 	g.UIManager.Register(&inkwell.SpeechBubble{
 		Name: "speech", MaxWidth: 360, Padding: Pad, OffsetY: 8, FallbackY: TopBarH + Pad,
 	})
-	// The dialogue box deliberately covers only the left region, so a tape can
+
-	// comment ALONGSIDE the conversation. It consumes every click while active,
-	// so the tape channel stays visible but inert — which is what we want.
 	g.UIManager.Register(&inkwell.DialogBox{
 		Name: "dialog", Bounds: inkwell.Rect(0, ScreenH-LineH*9, DividerX, LineH*9),
 		LineHeight: LineH, Padding: Pad,
 	})
-	// A verb coin, not a verb bar: a permanent VerbBar would eat the left
+
-	// region, leaving room for neither the inventory nor the tape slots.
 	g.UIManager.Register(&inkwell.RadialVerbs{
 		Name: "verbs", Trigger: inkwell.MouseButtonRight, Radius: 58,
 		Labels: map[string]string{
@@ -138,13 +83,6 @@ func registerUI(w *World) {
 	g.UIManager.Register(&inkwell.Cursor{Name: "cursor"})
 }
 
-// ----- windowSizer ------------------------------------------------------
-
-// windowSizer resizes the window once, on the first frame.
-//
-// inkwell.Run hardcodes a 4× window (core.dsl.go), which at 640×380 would be
-// 2560×1520 — larger than most laptop screens. Run sets the size before
-// entering the loop, so the only place to override it is the first tick.
 type windowSizer struct {
 	Name  string
 	Scale int
@@ -166,11 +104,6 @@ func (s *windowSizer) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	ebiten.SetWindowSize(ctx.Game.Width*scale, ctx.Game.Height*scale)
 }
 
-// ----- gate -------------------------------------------------------------
-
-// gate switches built-in widgets off in cutscene and menu mode. inkwell's
-// widgets have no Visible field and the Manager cannot unregister, so we wrap.
-// BlocksClickAt is forwarded, otherwise the verb coin would open over the HUD.
 type gate struct {
 	Name  string
 	W     *World
@@ -203,10 +136,6 @@ func (n *gate) BlocksClickAt(p inkwell.Point) bool {
 	return ok && b.BlocksClickAt(p)
 }
 
-// ----- hudFrame ---------------------------------------------------------
-
-// hudFrame paints the HUD strip's backdrop and the two dividers. The rule: the
-// two channels always have a visible, continuous separator between them.
 type hudFrame struct {
 	Name string
 	W    *World
@@ -221,9 +150,9 @@ func (h *hudFrame) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	}
 	th := ctx.Game.Theme()
 	vector.DrawFilledRect(dst, 0, HUDTop+1, ScreenW, ScreenH-HUDTop-1, th.PanelBG, false)
-	// horizontal: scene | HUD
+
 	vector.StrokeLine(dst, 0, HUDTop, ScreenW, HUDTop, 1, th.CharacterPanelBorder, false)
-	// vertical: world | tape
+
 	vector.StrokeLine(dst, DividerX, HUDTop+1, DividerX, ScreenH, 1, th.CharacterPanelBorder, false)
 }
 

inc/ui.screen_nav.go

@@ -1,18 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// screenNav — walking the deck with the arrow keys.
-//
-// The screens are connected — each one records where you can get to from it
-// (screen.exit.go) — but walking the map is the player's job, and a
-// screen whose beat is not written yet has nothing in it to walk towards. LEFT
-// and RIGHT step to the previous and next screen so the deck can be reviewed as
-// a deck: in concept-art order, wrapping at both ends. It is a tool for looking
-// at the game, not a way through it.
-//
-// It is deliberately inert whenever the game is actually doing something: no
-// stepping out of a cutscene, a menu, or a stopped world during dialogue. So
-// once a beat owns a screen, this cannot cut across it.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2"
@@ -32,7 +19,7 @@ func (n *screenNav) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 		return
 	}
 	step := 0
-	// inkwell's Input only covers the mouse; read the keys directly.
+
 	switch {
 	case inpututil.IsKeyJustPressed(ebiten.KeyArrowRight):
 		step = 1
@@ -46,8 +33,6 @@ func (n *screenNav) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	}
 }
 
-// neighbour returns the screen step places from the current one, wrapping.
-// Registration order is the deck order — see screen.manager.go.
 func (n *screenNav) neighbour(g *inkwell.Game, step int) string {
 	deck := g.SceneManager.Names()
 	if len(deck) < 2 {

inc/ui.screen_nav_test.go

@@ -6,9 +6,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// The arrow keys walk the deck in registration order and wrap at both ends —
-// until the beats grow doors, that walk is the only way through most screens,
-// so a dead end at either end would strand the player on a greybox screen.
 func TestScreenNavWrapsBothWays(t *testing.T) {
 	g := inkwell.NewGame("t", ScreenW, ScreenH)
 	for _, n := range []string{"a", "b", "c"} {

inc/ui.tape_channel.go

@@ -1,18 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// TapeChannel — the tape channel down the right-hand side.
-//
-// Not assistant UI: this is the voice of CHARACTERS. The wiki is explicit that
-// ACPs and Personal Tapes are not props but characters with their own voice.
-// That is why we do not use the built-in ChatLog — it paints every LogResponse
-// in one Theme.ChatLogResponse colour, whereas here three or four tapes can
-// speak into the same strip (Dex, the mystery tape, the tech support tape) and
-// the colour comes per speaker from Character.SpeechColor.
-//
-// Paul and the NPCs never appear here: they speak in the scene, through the
-// SpeechBubble. The channel is what the tapes said, plus — quietly — what you
-// did to prompt it. That gives the "joke book, not a scoreboard" log for free.
-
 import (
 	"image/color"
 
@@ -31,8 +18,6 @@ func (t *TapeChannel) GetName() string { return t.Name }
 
 func (t *TapeChannel) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {}
 
-// BlocksClickAt — the channel is not interactive, but it is a solid input
-// zone: the verb coin must not open over it.
 func (t *TapeChannel) BlocksClickAt(p inkwell.Point) bool {
 	return t.W.HUDVisible() && t.Bounds.Contains(p)
 }
@@ -51,7 +36,6 @@ func (t *TapeChannel) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 
 	vector.DrawFilledRect(dst, float32(b.X), float32(b.Y), float32(b.W), float32(b.H), th.ChatLogBG, false)
 
-	// Header: the name of whichever tape spoke last — not "console".
 	speaker, speakerCol := t.lastSpeaker(g, th)
 	drawTextC(dst, speaker, int(b.X)+pad, int(b.Y)+pad, speakerCol)
 	hy := float32(b.Y+pad+lh) + 2
@@ -69,12 +53,11 @@ func (t *TapeChannel) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 		var txt string
 		switch m.Kind {
 		case inkwell.LogAction:
-			// Your own actions — quiet, but visible: that is what makes the
+
-			// joke book readable.
 			col, txt = th.ChatLogPrompt, m.Text
 		case inkwell.LogResponse:
 			if !IsTape(m.Speaker) {
-				continue // Paul and the NPCs speak in the scene, not here
+				continue
 			}
 			col, txt = speechColor(g, m.Speaker, th.ChatLogResponse), m.Text
 		default:
@@ -98,8 +81,6 @@ func (t *TapeChannel) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	}
 }
 
-// lastSpeaker returns the display name and colour of whichever tape spoke
-// last, defaulting to the occupant of slot 1.
 func (t *TapeChannel) lastSpeaker(g *inkwell.Game, th inkwell.Theme) (string, color.Color) {
 	msgs := g.Messages()
 	for i := len(msgs) - 1; i >= 0; i-- {
@@ -111,7 +92,6 @@ func (t *TapeChannel) lastSpeaker(g *inkwell.Game, th inkwell.Theme) (string, co
 	return TapeDisplayName(Dex), speechColor(g, Dex, th.ChatLogResponse)
 }
 
-// speechColor is the character's voice colour, falling back to the theme's.
 func speechColor(g *inkwell.Game, name string, fallback color.Color) color.Color {
 	if c, ok := g.CharacterManager.Get(name); ok && c.SpeechColor != nil {
 		return c.SpeechColor

inc/ui.tape_slots.go

@@ -1,20 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// TapeSlots — the two slots of Paul's Armilla.
-//
-// In canon Paul's Armilla has TWO slots where the standard has one: Dex sits
-// permanently in the first, and tapes picked up during the game go into the
-// second. The wireframe deck does not know about this at all — this is the one
-// HUD element that comes purely from the wiki.
-//
-// Interaction follows the selected verb, like everything else:
-//
-//	talk  → converse with whoever occupies the slot
-//	look  → describe the slot
-//	use   + a selected tape → load it into slot 2
-//
-// Nothing here touches the world: this is the Vox side of the two channels.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2"
@@ -33,7 +18,6 @@ func (t *TapeSlots) BlocksClickAt(p inkwell.Point) bool {
 	return t.W.HUDVisible() && t.Bounds.Contains(p)
 }
 
-// slotRects splits the widget bounds into the two slot rectangles.
 func (t *TapeSlots) slotRects() (inkwell.Rectangle, inkwell.Rectangle) {
 	b := t.Bounds
 	w := (b.W - Pad) / 2
@@ -48,7 +32,6 @@ func (t *TapeSlots) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	mp := g.Input.Point()
 	r1, r2 := t.slotRects()
 
-	// Hover label, so the StatusLine spells out what is about to happen.
 	switch {
 	case r1.Contains(mp):
 		g.SetHoverLabel(TapeDisplayName(Dex))
@@ -71,7 +54,6 @@ func (t *TapeSlots) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	slot2 := r2.Contains(mp)
 	sel := g.Inventory.Selected()
 
-	// Loading a tape into slot 2.
 	if slot2 && sel != "" {
 		g.Inventory.Select("")
 		if IsTapeItem(sel) {
@@ -99,7 +81,7 @@ func (t *TapeSlots) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 			return
 		}
 		t.W.Do(TapeSay(Dex, "Empty. Nobody to talk to."))
-	default: // look, take, use all fall back to a description
+	default:
 		if !slot2 {
 			t.W.Do(TapeSay(Dex, "Me. Four kilobytes of a dead man. Be grateful."))
 			return
@@ -120,8 +102,6 @@ func (t *TapeSlots) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	th := g.Theme()
 	r1, r2 := t.slotRects()
 
-	// Two text rows per slot: the slot number on top, its occupant below.
-	// Both rows are LineH tall, so nothing can overlap the border.
 	drawSlot := func(r inkwell.Rectangle, label, body string, filled bool) {
 		bg, border, col := th.InventorySlotBG, th.ChatLogSystem, th.ChatLogSystem
 		if filled {
@@ -143,7 +123,6 @@ func (t *TapeSlots) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	}
 }
 
-// itemLabel is a short display label for an inventory item.
 func itemLabel(g *inkwell.Game, name string) string {
 	if it, ok := g.ItemManager.Get(name); ok && it.Description != "" {
 		return it.Description

inc/ui.text.go

@@ -1,15 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// The HUD's coloured text rendering.
-//
-// inkwell's drawText (asset.text.go) discards its colour argument (`_ = c`) and
-// always renders white through the ebitenutil debug font. The two-channel
-// colour rule — "if something is amber, a tape said it" — cannot work through
-// it, so the custom widgets do not call Game.DrawText: they render glyphs onto
-// a scratch image and blit it tinted with ColorScale. The built-in widgets
-// (StatusLine, DialogBox, TopBar) still render white. See README, "Engine
-// workarounds".
-
 import (
 	"image"
 	"image/color"
@@ -19,9 +9,6 @@ import (
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2/ebitenutil"
 )
 
-// glyphW and glyphH are the ebitenutil debug font's cell. The engine's own
-// textWidth uses the same 6px but counts bytes, which mismeasures any
-// non-ASCII text; we count runes.
 const (
 	glyphW = 6
 	glyphH = 16
@@ -29,10 +16,8 @@ const (
 
 var scratch *ebiten.Image
 
-// textW is the pixel width of a string, counted in runes.
 func textW(s string) int { return utf8.RuneCountInString(s) * glyphW }
 
-// drawTextC draws one line in colour c, with the same origin as DebugPrintAt.
 func drawTextC(dst *ebiten.Image, s string, x, y int, c color.Color) {
 	if s == "" {
 		return
@@ -60,8 +45,6 @@ func drawTextC(dst *ebiten.Image, s string, x, y int, c color.Color) {
 	dst.DrawImage(scratch.SubImage(image.Rect(0, 0, w, h)).(*ebiten.Image), op)
 }
 
-// wrap breaks s at word boundaries into lines no wider than maxPx. The engine's
-// wrapText is unexported and byte-based, hence our own.
 func wrap(s string, maxPx int) []string {
 	if maxPx <= glyphW || textW(s) <= maxPx {
 		return []string{s}
@@ -108,7 +91,6 @@ func wrap(s string, maxPx int) []string {
 	return out
 }
 
-// clip truncates a string so it fits into maxPx.
 func clip(s string, maxPx int) string {
 	r := []rune(s)
 	max := maxPx / glyphW

inc/ui.text_test.go

@@ -2,8 +2,6 @@ package inc
 
 import "testing"
 
-// The engine's textWidth counts bytes, which mismeasures any non-ASCII string.
-// Ours counts runes — pin that down, because wrapping depends on it.
 func TestTextWidthCountsRunes(t *testing.T) {
 	if got, want := textW("naïve"), 5*glyphW; got != want {
 		t.Errorf("textW(naïve) = %d, want %d", got, want)
@@ -35,11 +33,6 @@ func TestClipFits(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// Regression guard for the bug that made the first build unreadable: the
-// layout was derived from the wireframe deck's ratios, where text is 2.8% of
-// the screen height, while the engine's debug font is a fixed 6×16 cell. At
-// 320×200 that is 8% — so rows overlapped and the top bar overflowed into the
-// scene. Every text row must be at least as tall as the glyph cell.
 func TestLayoutFitsTheFont(t *testing.T) {
 	if LineH < glyphH {
 		t.Errorf("LineH (%d) is shorter than the glyph cell (%d): rows will overlap", LineH, glyphH)
@@ -47,21 +40,18 @@ func TestLayoutFitsTheFont(t *testing.T) {
 	if TopBarH < glyphH {
 		t.Errorf("TopBarH (%d) cannot hold a %dpx glyph", TopBarH, glyphH)
 	}
-	// The tape channel must fit a header, a rule and at least four body rows —
+
-	// below that the dialogue is unreadable.
 	const channelH = ScreenH - HUDTop - 4
 	body := (channelH - Pad*2 - LineH - 6) / LineH
 	if body < 4 {
 		t.Errorf("tape channel only fits %d body rows, want >= 4", body)
 	}
-	// The two tape slots must fit their two rows inside their border.
+
 	if slotsH < LineH*2+Pad {
 		t.Errorf("slotsH (%d) cannot hold two %dpx rows", slotsH, LineH)
 	}
 }
 
-// The HUD must not reach outside the screen, and the scene must keep a usable
-// aspect ratio for a point & click background.
 func TestSceneProportions(t *testing.T) {
 	if invY+invSlot*2+invGap > ScreenH {
 		t.Errorf("inventory runs off the bottom: %d > %d", invY+invSlot*2+invGap, ScreenH)

inc/ui.usewith_guard.go

@@ -1,22 +1,5 @@
 package inc
 
-// UseWithGuard — enforcing authored failure.
-//
-// The rule: a failed interaction fails IN CHARACTER, never with an error
-// message. But inkwell hardcodes a "Nem ehhez." flash in core.engine.go when an
-// item/hotspot pair has no OnUseWith handler, and that string cannot be
-// replaced from the domain.
-//
-// The fix, without touching the engine: widgets tick BEFORE the engine's
-// handleSceneInput and may consume the click. So this widget catches the
-// "selected item + hotspot with no authored pair" case and fails in Paul's
-// voice with a remark from Dex — costing nothing, since nothing is consumed and
-// nothing breaks.
-//
-// IMPORTANT: it must be registered FIRST so that it ticks LAST among the
-// widgets. That way every HUD widget (inventory, tape slots, dialogue) sees the
-// click first, and this only ever catches clicks that land on the scene.
-
 import (
 	"math/rand"
 
@@ -43,7 +26,7 @@ func (u *UseWithGuard) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	}
 	h := g.HotspotAt(g.Input.Point())
 	if h == nil || hasAuthoredPair(g, h, sel) {
-		return // leave authored pairs to the engine
+		return
 	}
 
 	g.Input.ConsumeLeft()
@@ -55,7 +38,6 @@ func (u *UseWithGuard) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	}
 	g.LogAction("> Use " + itemLabel(g, sel) + " on: " + label)
 
-	// The tone escalates on repeats: dry, then teasing, then a real nudge.
 	key := "fail." + sel + "." + h.Name
 	g.State.NoteTalked(key)
 	n := g.State.Talked(key)
@@ -66,7 +48,6 @@ func (u *UseWithGuard) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {
 	))
 }
 
-// hasAuthoredPair mirrors the engine's lookup order in invokeHotspotVerb.
 func hasAuthoredPair(g *inkwell.Game, h *inkwell.Hotspot, item string) bool {
 	if h.OnUseWith != nil {
 		if a, ok := h.OnUseWith[item]; ok && a != nil {
@@ -98,8 +79,6 @@ var dexTease = []string{
 	"Do it a few more times, maybe physics reconsiders.",
 }
 
-// dexFail escalates: dry, then teasing, then an actual hint — so the joke
-// never becomes the wall.
 func dexFail(n int) string {
 	switch {
 	case n <= 1:

inc/world.action.go

@@ -1,32 +1,18 @@
 package inc
 
-// The game's own actions, and the domain action pump.
-//
-// inkwell's queueAction is unexported, so domain widgets (TapeSlots) cannot put
-// an action on the engine's queue — the built-in widgets only manage it because
-// they live inside the package. inkwell.Ctx, however, is exported with exported
-// fields, so the domain can drive a Runner itself. That is what the pump does:
-// it runs HUD-originated actions (starting a dialogue, a tape line) alongside
-// the engine's own script runner. See README, "Engine workarounds".
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 	"github.com/hajimehoshi/ebiten/v2"
 )
 
-// ----- pump -------------------------------------------------------------
-
-// Do queues a HUD-originated action.
 func (w *World) Do(a inkwell.Action) {
 	if a != nil {
 		w.queue = append(w.queue, a)
 	}
 }
 
-// PumpTick advances the pump. The ActionPump widget calls it every frame.
 func (w *World) PumpTick(dt float64) {
-	// The TopBar's left section: location plus a single word for a stopped
+
-	// world. No pause overlay, no blur — one word says time has stopped.
 	if w.top != nil {
 		title := w.sceneTitle()
 		if w.paused {
@@ -62,8 +48,6 @@ func (w *World) sceneTitle() string {
 	return s.Name
 }
 
-// ActionPump is an invisible widget that advances the pump. The HUD registers
-// it; the world itself knows nothing about the widget tree.
 type ActionPump struct {
 	Name string
 	W    *World
@@ -73,8 +57,6 @@ func (p *ActionPump) GetName() string                            { return p.Name
 func (p *ActionPump) Tick(ctx *inkwell.UICtx)                    { p.W.PumpTick(ctx.DT) }
 func (p *ActionPump) Draw(dst *ebiten.Image, ctx *inkwell.UICtx) {}
 
-// ----- helpers ----------------------------------------------------------
-
 type fnAction struct{ fn func(*inkwell.Ctx) }
 
 func (a *fnAction) Start() inkwell.Runner { return &fnRunner{spec: a} }
@@ -86,23 +68,16 @@ func (r *fnRunner) Tick(ctx *inkwell.Ctx) inkwell.Status {
 	return inkwell.StatusDone
 }
 
-// Fn turns a function into a one-shot action that completes immediately.
 func Fn(f func(*inkwell.Ctx)) inkwell.Action { return &fnAction{fn: f} }
 
-// UseTheme switches the theme at runtime. This is the single line that makes
-// the Nokia-punk texture break in during the finale. inkwell saves ActiveTheme,
-// so the switch survives a save without needing a flag of its own.
 func UseTheme(name string) inkwell.Action {
 	return Fn(func(ctx *inkwell.Ctx) { ctx.Game.UseTheme(name) })
 }
 
-// SetMode switches the HUD mode (play / cutscene / menu).
 func SetMode(w *World, m Mode) inkwell.Action {
 	return Fn(func(*inkwell.Ctx) { w.SetMode(m) })
 }
 
-// EnterScene tells the domain which scene we are in. inkwell exposes no
-// CurrentScene accessor, and the pump needs Ctx.Scene.
 func EnterScene(w *World, name string) inkwell.Action {
 	return Fn(func(*inkwell.Ctx) {
 		if name != w.scene {
@@ -112,12 +87,6 @@ func EnterScene(w *World, name string) inkwell.Action {
 	})
 }
 
-// Back returns to the screen we came from.
-//
-// Most exits name their destination, because a door leads where it leads. A
-// screen that is reached from several different rooms cannot: the BBS terminal
-// is the same terminal whether you walked to it from the club, from Norman's
-// flat or from the roof, so its way out is "back", not a place.
 func Back(w *World) inkwell.Action {
 	return Fn(func(ctx *inkwell.Ctx) {
 		if w.prev == "" {
@@ -127,14 +96,6 @@ func Back(w *World) inkwell.Action {
 	})
 }
 
-// ----- TapeSay ----------------------------------------------------------
-
-// TapeSay is a line spoken by a tape.
-//
-// It is deliberately not inkwell.Say: Say puts a SpeechBubble above the
-// speaker's head, but tapes have no body in the scene — they speak into your
-// ear. This is the two-channel rule enforced in code: a tape can only reach the
-// tape channel, never the scene.
 func TapeSay(speaker, text string) inkwell.Action {
 	return &tapeSayAction{speaker: speaker, text: text}
 }
@@ -153,7 +114,7 @@ type tapeSayRunner struct {
 func (r *tapeSayRunner) Tick(ctx *inkwell.Ctx) inkwell.Status {
 	if !r.started {
 		r.started = true
-		// Same pacing as Say, so the two breathe together inside a Seq.
+
 		r.duration = 1.2 + float64(len([]rune(r.spec.text)))*0.05
 		ctx.Game.LogResponse(r.spec.speaker, r.spec.text)
 	}
@@ -164,11 +125,6 @@ func (r *tapeSayRunner) Tick(ctx *inkwell.Ctx) inkwell.Status {
 	return inkwell.StatusRunning
 }
 
-// ----- TapeOffer --------------------------------------------------------
-
-// TapeOffer offers a tape line during a cutscene: the Letterbox shows that a
-// tape would speak, but it only speaks if the player asks. A tape never
-// interrupts — the floor is the player's.
 func TapeOffer(w *World, line inkwell.Action) inkwell.Action {
 	return Fn(func(*inkwell.Ctx) {
 		w.tapeLine = line
@@ -176,7 +132,6 @@ func TapeOffer(w *World, line inkwell.Action) inkwell.Action {
 	})
 }
 
-// TakeTapeOffer queues the offered line and clears the prompt.
 func (w *World) TakeTapeOffer() {
 	if !w.tapeWaiting {
 		return
@@ -187,11 +142,6 @@ func (w *World) TakeTapeOffer() {
 	w.Do(line)
 }
 
-// ----- Paused -----------------------------------------------------------
-
-// Paused marks the world as stopped for the duration of the wrapped action.
-// inkwell exposes no dialogueActive accessor, so we mark it on the content
-// side: every dialogue start is wrapped in this.
 func Paused(w *World, inner inkwell.Action) inkwell.Action {
 	return &pausedAction{w: w, inner: inner}
 }

inc/world.manager.go

@@ -1,81 +1,52 @@
 package inc
 
-// World — the domain aggregate: a thin layer around the inkwell Game
-// holding the runtime state that must NOT be saved, plus the game's own
-// actions and the action pump.
-//
-// The world knows nothing about the HUD or the content: the ui and content
-// categories both build on it, never the other way round.
-
 import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// Mode is the HUD mode.
-//
-// IMPORTANT: this is deliberately NOT a State.Var. inkwell's state.save.go
-// serialises State.Vars but drops the in-flight script ("saves capture state at
-// idle/ready boundaries"), so a save taken mid-cutscene would reload into a
-// permanently letterboxed, HUD-less game with no script running. The mode is
-// therefore an unsaved runtime field.
 type Mode string
 
 const (
-	ModePlay     Mode = "play"     // full HUD
+	ModePlay     Mode = "play"
-	ModeCutscene Mode = "cutscene" // letterbox, HUD hidden
+	ModeCutscene Mode = "cutscene"
-	ModeMenu     Mode = "menu"     // main menu, HUD hidden
+	ModeMenu     Mode = "menu"
 )
 
-// World holds the runtime state that does not belong in a save file.
 type World struct {
 	G *inkwell.Game
 
 	mode Mode
 
-	scene   string           // current scene — inkwell exposes no accessor for it
+	scene   string
-	prev    string           // the one before it, for screens with no fixed way out
+	prev    string
-	paused  bool             // is the world stopped (during dialogue), for the TopBar suffix
+	paused  bool
-	pending string           // the tape currently being loaded into slot 2
+	pending string
-	queue   []inkwell.Action // HUD-originated actions waiting to run
+	queue   []inkwell.Action
 	running inkwell.Runner
-	top     *inkwell.TopBar // the location bar, so the pump can write its suffix
+	top     *inkwell.TopBar
 
-	// During a cutscene a tape signals but never interrupts: the line waits
-	// here until the player asks for it with SPACE.
 	tapeWaiting bool
 	tapeLine    inkwell.Action
 }
 
-// New wraps an existing inkwell game.
 func newWorld(g *inkwell.Game) *World {
 	return &World{G: g, mode: ModePlay}
 }
 
-// Mode returns the current HUD mode.
 func (w *World) Mode() Mode { return w.mode }
 
-// SetMode switches the HUD mode.
 func (w *World) SetMode(m Mode) { w.mode = m }
 
-// HUDVisible reports whether the HUD should draw: only in play mode.
 func (w *World) HUDVisible() bool { return w.mode == ModePlay }
 
-// Scene returns the name of the current scene.
 func (w *World) Scene() string { return w.scene }
 
-// Previous returns the screen we came from, empty at the start of the game.
 func (w *World) Previous() string { return w.prev }
 
-// Paused reports whether the world is stopped (during dialogue).
 func (w *World) Paused() bool { return w.paused }
 
-// SetTopBar hands over the location bar so the pump can write its suffix.
 func (w *World) SetTopBar(t *inkwell.TopBar) { w.top = t }
 
-// Slot2 returns the item name in the second tape slot, empty if there is none.
-//
-// Unlike Mode, this is REAL game state and lives in State.Var so that it is
-// saved.
 func (w *World) Slot2() string {
 	if v, ok := w.G.State.Var(VarSlot2).(string); ok {
 		return v
@@ -83,19 +54,14 @@ func (w *World) Slot2() string {
 	return ""
 }
 
-// SetSlot2 sets the contents of the second tape slot.
 func (w *World) SetSlot2(item string) { w.G.State.SetVar(VarSlot2, item) }
 
-// SetPending marks which tape is going into slot 2. The tape-insert script
-// performs the actual load; the widget only marks.
 func (w *World) SetPending(item string) { w.pending = item }
 
-// TakePending returns and clears the tape waiting to be loaded.
 func (w *World) TakePending() string {
 	item := w.pending
 	w.pending = ""
 	return item
 }
 
-// TapeWaiting reports whether a tape line has been offered but not yet spoken.
 func (w *World) TapeWaiting() bool { return w.tapeWaiting }

inc/world.manager_test.go

@@ -6,9 +6,6 @@ import (
 	inkwell "git.teletypegames.org/engines/inkwell"
 )
 
-// The mode must not leak into saved state: inkwell saves State.Vars but drops
-// the in-flight script, so a save taken mid-cutscene would otherwise reload
-// into a letterboxed, HUD-less game with nothing running.
 func TestModeIsNotSavedState(t *testing.T) {
 	w := newWorld(inkwell.NewGame("t", 320, 200))
 
@@ -19,7 +16,6 @@ func TestModeIsNotSavedState(t *testing.T) {
 		}
 	}
 
-	// Slot 2, by contrast, is real game state and must be saved.
 	w.SetSlot2(ItemMysteryTape)
 	if w.G.State.Var(VarSlot2) != ItemMysteryTape {
 		t.Error("slot 2 is not in State.Vars")
@@ -29,7 +25,6 @@ func TestModeIsNotSavedState(t *testing.T) {
 	}
 }
 
-// The widget marks a tape as pending; the script consumes it — once.
 func TestPendingIsConsumedOnce(t *testing.T) {
 	w := newWorld(inkwell.NewGame("t", 320, 200))
 	w.SetPending(ItemMysteryTape)

main.go

@@ -10,11 +10,6 @@ import (
 	"git.teletypegames.org/games/realworld/inc"
 )
 
-// The art ships inside the binary. js/wasm has no OS filesystem, so without
-// this every background in the web build falls back to a placeholder; and
-// `make binaries` packages the executable alone, with no assets directory
-// beside it.
-//
 //go:embed assets
 var assets embed.FS